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Can you please correct this paragraph?

A football player once had a dream. The dream was about the Queen of England. She was on a boat and was fishing. When she tried to put a worm on the fishing hook, her necklace fell into the water. A train conductor named Maxwell threw popcorn in the water. The fish ate the popcorn then gave the Queen her necklace. The Queen said, ”Thank you all for helping me get my necklace back!” “You are welcome said the conductor and all the fish.

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after the ‘you are welcome’ add speech marks to indicate they have stopped there sentence.
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