Question

Read the excerpt from a student’s essay.

As Rainsford enters the dining room, he immediately becomes aware of Zaroff’s expensive and sophisticated taste. He notes the decorations, the food, the drink, all of which are exquisite and advertise Zaroff’s privileged aristocratic upbringing. Rainsford is initially impressed by the general’s home and finds him to be a "thoughtful and affable host.”

Which revision would best help expand the ideas in the excerpt?

adding some of the dialogue between Rainsford and Zaroff
adding that Rainsford comes from a privileged background as well
adding that the residence is situated on a wild overgrown island
adding a more-detailed description of the decorations, food, and drink

Answer 1

d. adding a more-detailed description of the decorations, food, and drink

Step-by-step explanation:

The other choices either introduce new information that is not present in the excerpt, or they do not provide enough detail to fully expand on the idea of Zaroff's sophisticated taste. d. adding a more-detailed description of the decorations, food, and drink would help to provide more information about what Zaroff has chosen to surround himself with, and how that reflects his background and taste.

Answer 2

D "adding a more-detailed description of the decorations, food, and drink"

Step-by-step explanation:

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