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Begin a story with we set off early in the morning

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We set off early in the morning, the pale blue sky complemented the sandy shores.. the brisk breeze of the air filled my lungs with hope. Hope for a better life a better future for us.. "Welp the car's all packed up, you ready to leave yet?" said Zian "Oh I- I didn't realize we'd be leaving so soon" "I thought maybe I could just say bye to the kids and my mom" I said while holding back the tears "Yea yea, Of course, take your time"

As I went to their graves I remembered all the good memories I had with them, the laughter of Sam and Dylan in morning playing tag whilst getting ready for school, the wise advice I would hear every time Liam would hit us, the family beach vacations we all enjoyed... It had been 3 months since the car accident happened.. Liam and I got into a huge fight and the kids were trying to defend me from Liam.. he lost control and I lost all three of them that day.....

not too soon after mom got diagnosed with lung cancer... only the doctors said the cancer was too strong and had already been spreading, so there was nothing they could really do aside from just telling her to say goodbye to her loved ones...she soon died only a couple days after

Zian, Becca, and I were devasted only I knew, that was only the beginning of my suffering.....

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Characters:

Lily- Antagonist

Zian- Eldest Brother of Lily

Becca- Little sister of Lily

Sam- Daughter of Lily

Dylan- Son of Lily

Liam- Abusive/drug addict/unstable husband of Lily

Percilla- Mother of Lily

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we set off early in the morning bags packed and ready to go. I feel like I forget something but I move past it. We all get in the car and I put in my headphones, start listening to some music, and see my parents talking about something boring. My siblings watching movies, listening to music, reading,etc. Then it jumps into my head I forgot the snacks. I hope nobody will notice until about 10 minutes later I hear an "im hungry" from my younger sister. I pretend not to hear her. My dad turns to me and asks to hand my sister the snack bag but I lie and say it wasnt my job to grab it. And problem solved. Then found out about 5 minutes of arguing later I really wasnt supposed to bring the snack bag. It was my dads job.

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