NEEDING HELP IN ENGLISH SOMEBODY???? GOT A 30% ON IT
Her feedback Hi Mia,
Thanks for working on this some more. I'm excited to see you develop your final draft! At this point in the essay, you should have 4 paragraphs: intro, 2 body, conclusion WITH your Works cited. You should not be labeling sections anymore. It should be clear as your audience reads what is what in your paper.
Make sure you have also responded to the reflection questions in the assignment.
I would still like for you to review the previous assignments and my feedback on them to make sure you are incorporating support from your research sources into both of your body paragraphs. Remember that arguments rely on logos, and logos relies on research!
Make sure you thoroughly go through the editing checklist on page 3 of the lesson. This will help you check for grammar issues. Working through it step by step will be helpful.