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“Diana woke up on an oddly warm winter day. She ran down the stairs. She quickly ate her breakfast. She headed out the door. She went to her friend Mellissa’s house to work on their act for the talent show. She loved to dance. She knew Mellissa was a good partner for the show. She was ready.” What makes this passage weak?

A. It lacks a variety of sentence structure
B. It is full of clichés
C. It needs to be proofread
D. There are no issues

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A. it lacks a variety of sentence structure.
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