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Hi! I’m writing a bio for myself and I’m not sure if it’s correct in grammar or not. I need your help!!

“In 2012 I graduated from Hanoi National University with a Bachelor of Mathematics, and two years later, I started working as an official lecturer at Thuong Mai University. Until now, I have had 4 years of experience in teaching Econometrics, Mathmatical Economics, and Scientific Study Methodology.
I have an interest in researching on the application of econometrics & statistics models in the economy.
I have successfully made a study of the asymmetric phenomenon on Hanoi Stock Market.
I am currently researching on some projects such as the tobacco retail network, the exportation of Vietnam’s agricultural products to international key markets, and the sharing economy.”

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“In 2012 I graduated from Hanoi National University with a Bachelor of Mathematics, and two years later, I started working as an official lecturer at Thuong Mai University. Until now, I have had 4 years of experience in teaching Econometrics, Mathematical Economics, and Scientific Study Methodology.

I have an interest in researching the application of econometrics & statistics models in the economy.

I have successfully made a study of the asymmetric phenomenon on the Hanoi Stock Market.

I am currently researching on some projects such as the tobacco retail network, the exportation of Vietnam’s agricultural products to international key markets, and the sharing economy.”

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