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I am writing an essay about my career and I need help with perfecting my introduction. “The career I chose to present this year was photography. As most people know photographers are professionals that focus on the art of photography with a digital or film camera. Photographers use artificial or natural lighting to snap pictures of various people, places and things in different settings.” Please help (hearting all)

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I would phrase it differently, such as; “The career I decided to present this year was photography. Photographers have made themselves well know as professionals who create artistic photos with a digital or film camera, photographers can use artificial or natural lighting to snap pictures of various people, places and objects in different positions and settings”.

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