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Rewrite The Passage. Correctly.

Rewrite The Passage. Correctly.-example-1
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The Golden Mare was real old when she met Alexi, she looked quite healthy and young. The Golden Mare could gallop quickly throughout the forest as though she was made of wind, and her hooves hit the ground hard when she ran. Alexi could not believe his fortune when he saw this mysterious creature. He rubbed his eyes roughly, expecting the horse to suddenly disappear
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