Question

I would like someone to proofread my argumentative essay.

Here is the prompt.
Consider the advantages and disadvantages of online education and education in a traditional classroom setting. Which method of learning is better for students? Write an essay in which you try to persuade a classroom teacher that either online or classroom learning is best.
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Answer 1

Sup, only thing I could find wrong, which it isn't really, is you could have linked the fact about (can't say sew-e-side here) being listed 10 on causes of death to the leading cause of Gen Z deaths. Other than that, no grammatical errors (a gen z who knows how to write? Quite pog of you), no run on sentences, the facts and personality have the balance of an experienced writer, 10/10. If your teacher finds something wrong with this, they're jealous.

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