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Which of the following would be a good hook for a personal essay?

A. Ranch work is better than city work.
O B. If you want to build muscles, work on a ranch.
C. When Shiloh reared back on his hind legs, tangling the reins in my
hand, I knew I was in trouble.
D. None of the above are correct.

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Answer: C is a good hook for a personal essay.

Explanation: It uses first person, has great adjective usage, and allows readers to wonder what happens next.

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