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A few minutes later, the dutchman who had first entered our office, the man with the gun, came back into my room. ignoring me, he sat down at elli's desk across from me and dialed the telephone. i heard him asking that a car be sent. why is this excerpt suspenseful?

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because it involves a weapon and u can feel the tension even with no talking
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