Question

HURRY Good authors choose their words very carefully. Take a few minutes to write a short paragraph describing an experience you have recently had. Pick a location you went to or an event you attended. Once you have finished, read over what you have written. Now, write a second paragraph. In it, you will repeat the information from the first paragraph, but you will choose your words more carefully. Ask yourself questions like: What words capture this image exactly? What is the best word to convey how something looked, or how I felt? Take more time with the second paragraph. Your response should be at least 150 words in total.

Answer 1

1.One time when i was driving home from soccer with my mom and my sister, a car came from our left and hit us. She was texting and driving and eating.

2. One time, on my way home from soccer practice, a car slammed into us! Come to find out she was texting, eating, and driving! I will never forget that day because it changed my life!