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What is the correct way to rewrite these sentences:

And while I believe that what someone eats is a matter of personal choice and not something that society should control. People need information if they are going to make wise decisions.


And while I believe that what someone eats is a matter of personal choice, it is not something that society should control. Because people need information if they are going to make wise decisions.

And I believe that what someone eats is a matter of personal choice, it is not something that society should control, people need information if they are going to make wise decisions.

And while I believe that what someone eats is a matter of personal choice and not something that society should control, people need information if they are going to make wise decisions.

And while, I believe that what someone eats is a matter of personal choice it is not something that society should control, because people need information if they are going to make wise decisions.

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Answer: C. And while I believe that what someone eats is a matter of personal choice and not something that society should control, people need information if they are going to make wise decisions.

Explanation: it has better structure and style.

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