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Which revision should the writer make to maintain the active voice in the paragraph below?

Carl always enjoyed going camping with his Uncle Mike. Each year a different location would be chosen and careful plans made. First, they
choose the best date for their trip. Next, they would make a list of supplies and equipment that they would need. Finally, they would create a
schedule of activities. The trips were always fun and relaxing because all of the work had been done in advance.
O A. Change sentence 2 to "Each year they chose a different location and made careful plans."
O B. Change sentence 3 to "First, the best date for their trip would be chosen by them."
OC. Change sentence 4 to "Next, a list of supplies and equipment that they would need would be made by them."
O D. Change sentence 5 to "Finally, a schedule of activities would be created."

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I would say A-

Change sentence 2 to "Each year they chose a different location and made careful plans."

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