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The hole department meets every Thursday afternoon for two hours. There is twelve people in our department. All the people in our department hard workers. Everyone comes in early and leaves late. We are all overworked. Nobody ever complains about the amount of work there is do. But nobody works hard good enough to please Constance. That’s our boss. 7) Anybody has ever seen her smile. Nobody has ever heard her say anything 8) complimentry to anyone. When Constance enters the room, everybody stops talking.

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The whole department meets every Thursday afternoon for two hours. There are twelve people in our department. All the people in our department are hard workers. Everyone comes in early and leaves late. We are all overworked. Nobody ever complains about the amount of work there is do. But nobody works hard enough to please Constance, our boss. Nobody has ever seen her smile. Nobody has ever heard her say anything complimentary to anyone. When Constance enters the room, everybody stops talking.

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