1. What story are you referring to here? Are you meant to talk about this story is the roles of social media for the students?
2. Apart from information about the movement, what other important pieces of information are made available by social media?
3. Try to move away from the BLM movement if you are not meant to just focus on this movement. What other topics that are important can students follow on social media?
4. Do you need to add more details? For example, you might discuss another role of social media. In what other way does social media help students? What another role can you discuss? How does social media help students communicate, learn etc., for example?