Why does the summary need to be revised? Read the summary of the section of "The Beginnings of the Maasai," where the volcanic eruption and its results are described As a result of a volcanic eruption,

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Why does the summary need to be revised?

Read the summary of the section of "The Beginnings of
the Maasai," where the volcanic eruption and its results
are described
As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle
were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his
cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth.
The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob
and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.
O The summary incorrectly restates the central idea.
O The summary includes too many minor details.
The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas.
The summary is missing important words and
phrases.