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It was dark at night its 3:30 AM and a group of teenagers found them self's in the woods when they hear a noise of a twig break behind them. They look, there's nothing, then they hear someone say, “come here children”. The teenagers run away from the voice for 3 minutes, but the voice gets closer and closer, one of the teenagers look behind them and see a 7-foot white figure that is chasing them. They try and outrun the monster, one of the teenagers saw a log cabin and they hide in there for a few minutes until they lose the monster...
An hour later they hear the monster walk past the door after they see the monster is gone, in the meantime they look around in the log cabin, Jaron (one of the teenagers) sees a book on the monster he saw, and the title is called “The tale of Slenderman.” He calls over everyone over to look at the book and he opened the book and he read a news article that says, “A group of teenage friends went in the woods to have a party and never came back.” Jaron and everyone looked at the next page and it says, “A group of teenage girls found alive following a 7-foot entity, but it looks like they have stab wounds all around their bodies.” then Jaron asks everyone, “Do you guys think this is real or fake?” Asked Jaron. Maria says, “This looks real and we are getting chased by that THING that can kill people.” everyone agrees with what Maria says.
Later Maria hears something, she sees Nancy watching out the door. “See anything Nancy?” Nancy says, “Not yet.” “we should get going” Jaron says. “Wait.” Jaron says, “Look, it says you can't look at its face or it can take control of you!” “Oh, great so we can't look at its face either, that’s just great.” Maria says. “Ok so if we stay quiet and stay out of its sight then we can escape.” Jaron says. Everyone agrees with what Jaron says. “Ok are we all ready?” asks Jaron. “Yes.” everyone says. They open the door, they go outside. “Look around make sure Slenderman is not around so if you hear anything let everybody know, Ok?” Whispers Jaron. “Ok,” everyone quietly. Nancy hears in the distance, “Come here I will get youuu and we will have fun forever.” says Slenderman in a deep voice. “Did you guys hear that?” Nancy asks everyone. Everyone says “No.”
2 Days later, “Ok guys were almost out,” Jaron says. “Yayyy” everyone says. “SHHHHHH were not completely out yet,” says Nancy. Everyone agrees. “Wait he's watching us I have a feeling that he is watching our every move,” says Maria. “look at that tree does it look weird to you?” says Jaron. “Oh no, RUUUUUNNNN!!” says Nancy “ITS HIM WERE ALMOST OUT CMON THIS WAY” screams Jaron. And in the end, they made it alive. Oh, my, god, WE MADE IT OUT ALIVE HAHAHA TAKE THAT... SLENDERMANN!!!” yells everyone.

Answer 1

Answer: The morning was dark and the time was 3:30 AM, the startled group of teenagers found themselves in the forest that destroyed their nerves entirely. They all jumped when they hear the most admittingly frightful sound, they were startled by the sound of a branch break behind underneath someone or something's foot. As they all look to see what had made the noise, to their dreadful terror there was nothing behind them that they could see. All of a sudden they heard the most alarming voice they had ever heard, " Come here children!" the voice said from an unknown location in the thickend woods. The teenagers couldn't stand the fear anymore, the group tried to run away from the voice but it seemed as if no matter where they went the voice would fallow them. They had been running away from the voice for 3 minutes now, one of the teens gathered enough courage to look behind them but they immediately it. What the teen say was truly the most trepidatious figure ever, the figure was at least 7 feet tall and had a white face. They continued to try and outrun the figure, as they made their way farther through the woods they could see a log cabin standing alone in the dark. They ran full speed into the cabin and slam the door behind them, they wait in the cabin until they were sure they had lost the tall figure. An hour had passed and they had heard the figure walking past the door slowly as if trying to hear for their movement, when the teenagers were sure this time that the figure was gone they looked around in the cabin in meantime. Jaron who was one of the teens say a book about the figure they had just seen, the title read "The Tale of Slenderman." He called out to the rest of the group and they came over, he opened the book and read one of the articles that were inside. "A group of teenage friends went into the woods to have a party and never came back afterward." Jaron flipped the page and saw another article and decidded to read it, "A group of teenage girls who were found alive following the 7-foot entity, but it looked like they have stab wounds all around their bodies." Jaron looked up from the book and at the group, "Dor you think this stuff is real or fake?" he asked everyone. " I don't know Jaron, this book looks pretty legit and we are getting chaced by this...THING!" Maria (who was also another one of the teenagers) said with a shiver of fear, later Maria hears something outside, she sees Nanci (another teen) watching the door with sheer panic. "See anything Nancy?" Nancy shakes her head lightly, "Alright then we should get moving!" says Jaron looking at the group. "Wait!." Jaron says " Look, it says that we can't look at its face or it can take control of you!" "Oh great! Sor we can't look at its face either, that's just great!" Maria says folding her arms. "Okay so if we stay quiet and stay out if it's sight then we can escape?" Jaron asks Jaron "Yes." the group says. They looked at the door with all their fear still gathered, they go up to the door and open it with shaking hands, they open the door and step out, "Everyone look around to make sure Slenderman isn't nearby if you see him let the group know." whispered Jaron. "Okay." everyone quietly replied Nancy heard something in the distance, "Come here I will get youuuuuuu and we can have some fun foreverrrrrrrrrrr." Said Slenderman in a deep voice. "Did you guys hear that?" Nancy asked the group, "No." the group said with a whisper. ( 2 Days Later.) "Okay guys we're almost out," Jaron says. "YAAAY!" everyone says, "SHHHHHHHHH! Were not out completely yet," said Nancy with a whisper. Everyone agrees. "Wait he's watching us, I feeling that he is watching our every move." says Maria. "Look at that tree. Does that tree look weird to you?" says Jaron squinting his eyes at the tree in the distance, "oh no, RUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!" says Nancy as she sprints in the direction of the exit "ITS HIM!! WERE ALMOST OUT, COME ONE GUY'S HURRY!! THIS WAY, THIS WAY!!!" screams Jaron. "OH MY GOD!!!!!! WE'RE ALIVE!!! TAKE THAT SLENDERMAN!!!!" yells everyone as they all jumped up and down with excitement.