Question

When the rainbow appeared in the sky the children started pointing and shouting excitedly. What is the best way to correct this sentence?​

Answer 1

When a rainbow appeared in the sky the children started to point and shout excitedly.

Step-by-step explanation:

That’s how I think it could work please push thanks and this was my own thought hope it helps.

Answer 2

this is the original sentence: When the rainbow appeared in the sky the children started pointing and shouting excitedly.

Step-by-step explanation:

this is the sentence corrected: When the rainbow appeared in the sky the children pointed and shouted excitedly.

hope this helps!

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