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There is tension being drawn in . The mother can sense it and sees the war between her and her daughter approaching, that’s why she mentions images of a war "In her bright helmet she looks at me as if across a great distance. Distant fires can be glimpsed in resin light of her eyes" she connecting her feelings with imagery of war.

can you tell me if this is good or not.

Answer 1

It's great! I like the part where it says "Distant fires can be glimpsed in resin light of her eyes" but I think it could use a little spice around "and sees the war between her and her daughter approaching" but I'm not sure what to add.

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