Question

I don't know how to do a topic sentence for my first body paragraph for an explanatory essay so I tried doing two tell me which is less bad ?

A)First Willowdean’s mom provides to her financially. It may be a basic thing but it counts.

B)You would agree that first comes the basic things but they count like how Willowdean’s mom provides to her financially.

Answer 1

B is better

Step-by-step explanation:

you are trying to explain this to a other person. Saying good things like "you would agree" is a great way to start it off. If you have any other things you need help with let me know.