Question

Hey guys i wrote a song can u tell me if its good pls? I appreciate it

IN TOO DEEP By Brayden k

waoh, what i told you was the truth, and so are these feelings that i have for u
but you moved on girl, guess i was in to deep

i dont know what to think anyore
i thought we were real, thought we were ment to be
but i guess i was wrong guess i was in to deep


i havent finished it yet but tell me if u like it ;)

Answer 1

woah

just woah

thats amazing !!!!!!!!

Answer 2

Apart from the poor spelling mistakes, those lyrics aren't half bad. If you didn't know, there are certain websites that can turn your lyrics into a song with a full band and singers and everything. Though it comes at a cost, but it's definelty worth seeing your work go to good use.