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Make my intro paragraph better ASAP!

Make my intro paragraph better ASAP!-example-1

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i don’t know what your prompt is or anything but i hope this can give you some ideas on phrasing and using more descriptive adjectives! if you feel as if you’re using a word too much, don’t be afraid to google synonyms! it makes you sound smarter :)
Make my intro paragraph better ASAP!-example-1
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