they use show not tell meaning they use dialouge and things to make people cry sometimes like if someone was dying. you can't just say, they died. you have to say something like, he slowly shut his eyes closed, his body as still as a boulder. something like that. im on watt.pad so if you want you can check out my books and my username is RedHot_11. so again check it out if you want ideas or just to read and maybe message me for any ideas for new books. That would help.