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Can someone help me write a more interesting and engaging hook sentence. The topic is about cultures. Mine is “ I have always believed that culture should be embraced, not hidden”

Just something more engaging :)

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It sounds pretty good to me. It directs our attention to what your point of view is. You've declared a side. Now you have to fill it in somehow. The next sentence should contain some idea of how a culture should be embraced.

One hint I can offer you. Don't overload the sentence you have. I have no idea where you are going, but you could say something like.

We should learn to appreciate the food people prepare. We should observe and celebrate the work that goes into good clothing and note what it is made of. (One more sentence of what to appreciate should do it).

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