Question

Revise the following email so that it demonstrates formal English.

what up, lil bro? how u been? we should totes try 2 get a ride to da mall next week n then do sumthin nice 4 mom her birthday is like next week??? lmk what you think we shud get her…flowers n stuff like that is sooooo boring. Luv ya, Sis

Answer 1

Hey! What's up Brother! How have you been? we should try to get a ride to the local mall next week to do something nice for mom because her birthday is like next week. Let me know what you think we should get her... Flowers and cliche things like that are boring so we should get something else.

Love you,

Your big sister

Answer 2

Hello, little brother. How are you doing? I think that we should ask someone if they could drop us off at the mall next week, and then make a commitment to doing something nice for her. Her birthday is around next week, is it not? In my opinion, we should get her something sentimental. What do you think we should get her? I feel like flowers and traditional presents is bland. I love you, little sister.

Explanation:Hope this helps.