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Write a paragraph in which you try to persuade me to believe something that you believe.​

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I believe we should not allow zoo's.

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I believe we should not allow zoo's, because one animals need that independence to survive. If animals are hurt and are treated to the best capability then they are released they're going to forget how to hunt, what to eat, who are dangerous predators. etc.) NOW I'm Not saying that we don't help animals but for the animals that are already healthy and are stuck in cages for money, I'm saying that isn't right. What if you were in that cage because people wanted to see you for entertainment, what would you feel? Trapped, scared, annoyance? People banging on the windows, flashing bright cameras, watching everything you do? Watching you go to the bathroom, and Just poking around in your business? So inconclution I believe we should not allow zoo's.

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