Question

Which one of these is NOT part of a good thesis statement? (more than 1 i think?)

A: The writer's position on the topic
B: The topic of the essay
C: The writer's reasons
D: "Hello, my name is..."

Answer 1

Answer D, C, and A is not a good thesis.

Step-by-step explanation:

D: They already know your name. It is in your heading. Also, I doubt the person reading it wouldn't care about what your name is. (Sorry if that came out mean, I didn't mean it.... I am really A nice person!)

C: Don't just throw in reasons in their face without them knowing what you are talking about.

A: Personally I wouldn't do that, First you should at least say some interesting facts to get the reader hooked on.

I hope that was helpful!

Answer 2

Okay so B and C are both good ones. But A and D are very off so it’s either one of those. So since this is a thesis essay you 100% do not want to put “hello my name is...” it is just not a very formal way to start any essay, it
Is just not appropriate. But A you aren’t supposed to have your opinion in a thesis essay but if you are just stating your view point it’s ok but try not to put your opinion i there.




So the answer will be D: “hello, my name is...”



Hope this help:) please mark