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Help me out with a story i'm making

wednesday July 14th, 2021

What is today….Oh yeah, I almost forgot it is my Birthday. Hi, my name is Mia (something), and this is the story of my crazy life. I am turning 14 today, and right now I am wishing i was not. And if you are wondering why, here is the reason. My parents just divorce, like as in today at this very moment as I speak, I mean write but you know what I mean. And they want me to choose who to live with. And honestly like every 14-year-old, all we can think about is how now we get everything double, so yea I am kind of happy but also, I feel like this is my fault. Because honestly if it was not my fault why have I been mentioned every single time they fought. And you might be wondering what I am talking about so here is a little background information. My parents meet at age 14 and 16, and my mom got pregnant at 17. So, my dad’s parents wanted my mom and my dad to get married after my mom gave birth to me. But after they got married they were always fighting about everything but mainly it was either about money or about how my mother can’t ever get any fresh air because he was always telling her what to do and the same topic ended about me. Yet it still does until about like today, that they are divorced completely. But let’s not think about that right now let’s think about the fact that they haven’t even took a minute or second to say happy birthday, they don’t always say that but I will at least take it for the years I was told the next day.

Thursday July 15th, 2021

Hey today is the next day so (July 15, 2020) today like always I get told Happy Birthday how exciting, but I wish I got it told the correct day, but I have worst news. So first I have to choose between both my parents and now that I got more information so if I go with my mom we are going to Canada and if I go with my dad I go to Alaska, wow can’t believe it but luckily I got one good thing I get to stay for the first semester so I can at least have time with my friends, talking about friends those are the ones who after the first semester I’m going to leave behind. So, keeping count of how people I have to say goodbye too.

1.Yahir (Guy best friend)

2.Gabriella (Girl best friend)

3.Jamillet(Friend)

4.Jarells(Friend)

5.Carlos(Friend)

6.Rafael(Friend)

7.Ja’Myah(Friend)

Tuesday July 20 , 2021

Answer 1

nice story :))))))))))))))))

Answer 2

I'll be putting the changes in bold.

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Wednesday, July 14th, 2021

What is today….Oh yeah, I almost forgot it is my birthday. Hi, my name is Mia Jackson, and this is the crazy story of my life. I am turning 14 today, and right now I wish I was not. If you are wondering why here is the reason. My parents just got a divorce, as of today. They want me to choose who to live with. Like every 14-year-old, all we can think about is how now we get everything doubled, so yea I am kind of happy about that but I also feel like this is my fault. If it was not my fault why have I mentioned every single time they fought. You might be wondering what I am talking about? So here is a little background information. My parents met at the age of 14 and 16. My mom got pregnant at 17. My dad’s parents wanted them to get married after my mom gave birth. After they got married, they were always fighting about everything. Mainly it was either about money or about how my mother can’t ever get any fresh air because he was always telling her what to do and the same topic ended with me. But let’s not think about that right now let’s think about the fact that they haven’t even taken a minute or second to say happy birthday.

Thursday, July 15th, 2021

Hey, today is the next day so today like always I get told happy birthday how exciting, but I wish I got it told the correct day, but I have more bad news. I have to choose between my parents. If I go with my mom we are traveling to Canada. If I go with my dad we are traveling to Alaska. Wow, I can’t believe it. Luckily I got one good thing I get to stay for the first semester so I can at least have time with my friends, speaking about friends here are some of the friends that I'm going to leave behind after the first semester. Just keeping count of how people I have to say goodbye to.

1.Yahir

2.Gabriella

3.Jamillet

4.Jarells

5.Carlos

6.Rafael

7.Ja’Myah