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Can someone write these two sentence correctly what I mean by that is like punctuation, misspelled words, and taking out words.

1. When John's brother Lee, moved out and John moved into Lee's room.

2. He especially liked having Lee's aquarium and the tank light ain't working

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When John's brother, Lee, moved out, John moved into Lee's room.

He especially liked having Lee's aquarium, although the tank light wasn't working.

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