Question

Read this excerpt from "What I Hope to Leave Behind." As I see it we can have no new deal until great groups of people, particularly the women, are willing to have a revolution in thought; are willing to look ahead, completely unconscious of losing the house on Fifth Avenue as long as somewhere they have a place to live which they themselves may gradually make into a home; are willing to give up constant competition for a little more material welfare and cooperate in everything which will make all those around them acquire a little more freedom and graciousness in life. Why would paraphrasing be an effective way to communicate this excerpt to an audience?

Answer 1

You could keep much of the original language while updating some of the older references.

Step-by-step explanation:

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Answer 2

You could quickly summarize the main points for an audience who may not know about Eleanor Roosevelt.

You could rearrange the sequence of information so that it would be easier for your audience to understand.

Step-by-step explanation:

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