Question

Does this poem sound good enough?

If you think I should add or fix errors, please comment. Thank you :)

Salva dut poem

A wise boy named Salva lived in Africa, handling a hard past with the tribe carrying pride.
Hoping to see his loved ones at least just once.
Into a new life with a new light. Describes the life of dull eyes.
Saved and raised money for Africa for clean water that surprised her and
applauded him.

Answer 1

OMG YES!!!!!!!!! I have read A Long Walk To Water and that poem is PERFECT!!!!!!!!!

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Answer 2

Answer: Its pretty good just maybe rewrite the last stanza because it kinda soujnds off yk

Explanation: (: