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An immigrant claims to have been humiliated when bosses at a Radio Shack electronics store in Disco Illinois had him dance to a Daft Punk song as part of a job interview.

… to a Daft Punk song, as part of a job interview.



… bosses at a Radio Shack, electronics store, in Disco …



An immigrant claims, to have been humiliated when …



… electronics store in Disco, Illinois, had him …



... been humiliated, when bosses at …

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Answer:

… electronics store in Disco, Illinois, had him …

Step-by-step explanation:

On reading the given passage, it is evident that there are no pauses or any correct punctuation. It is just a 'one-breath' continuous flow of words.

The correct way to make the sentence valid is to use pauses whenever and wherever necessary. And it is a must to put a pause/ comma in "Disco, Illinois,...".

Thus, the correct frame of the sentence will become-

"An immigrant claims to have been humiliated when bosses at a Radio Shack electronics store in Disco, Illinois, had him dance to a Daft Punk song as part of a job interview."

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