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STAGE ONE: Bunnik to Amsterdam
Our first cycling stage in Holland will be a 38 mile (60 km) ride from
Bunnik to Amsterdam via Hilversum. Bunnik lies in the very centre of
the Netherlands surrounded by rolling woodland meandering rivers and
fields of tulips. For part of the journey we'll be cycling alongside the
'Crooked Rhine' river. Admittedly the looping bends will slow us down a
bit but in the later stages there are several long straights on which we'll
be able to make up time.
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STAGE ONE: Bunnik to Amsterdam

Our first cycling stage in Holland will be a 38 mile (60 km) ride from

Bunnik to Amsterdam via Hilversum. Bunnik lies in the very centre of

the Netherlands, surrounded by rolling woodland meandering rivers and

fields of tulips. For part of the journey, we'll be cycling alongside the

'Crooked Rhine' river. Admittedly, the looping bends will slow us down a

bit but in the later stages there are several long straights on which we'll

be able to make up time.

Sorry if I'm wrong but I hope this is correct

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