Question

Does this make sense? If not can you help me fix it. (I suck at writing stories)

also this story is only the thoughts so there is no talking

Molly: What the? What is going on? I'm going to see why the power is off. Oh my god no! Why would he do that? What happened!?

Christina: What's that noise? Ugh, what is James doing? Why is he going down to the basement? What happened to the power, why did he turn it off? Whats crying? THE DOG! He...he killed it. Why is he running upstairs. He is back down stairs, what-what is wrong with him? He knows I didn’t do anything, why is he staring at me? What has gone into James?

James: Why is the power out? What is the noise in the basement? I should go check it out. What is that noise? No, what is she doing! NO! I have to do something! WHAT DID SHE DO!

Answer 1

It kind of makes since. lol

Step-by-step explanation:

Christina said James was in the basement and he killed the dog. But then when you get to James part it says " No, what is she doing, NO! I have to do something! WHAT DID SHE DO!" So either Christina was moving the dog or James saw Christina kill the dog. Who ever killed the dog should go on a killing spree.

Ex: Christina(keep hers the same way)

James: The powers out. That means no one saw me. (notices Christina, sees the look on her face) DANG! She saw me. I have to kill her to if im going to get away wit this.

Not word per word but make James the bad guy and either he kills Christina or he kidnaps her.