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PLEASE HELP!!!!

IM GIVING 60 POINTS! (sorry I don't have that many points)

Task:

➡️ Writing a Flash Fiction/Short Detective Story (minimum 400 words)

OR ➡️

At least give me an Idea/Plan ;
(not too complacated)

Including : At least 1 clue, the crime scene (where, when, who is the culprit, what is the crime, how was it done, victim, With the involvement of a Police (and/or) Detective

*DOES NOT NEED TO BE PERFECT*

THANK YOU!!!!​

1 Answer

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Answer:

Mysterious Stranger

He really did look like a tourist, with a camera around his neck and a bottle of sunscreen sticking out of his tote bag.

The portly man sat on the terrace, sipping lemonade and pretending to look at a glossy cruise brochure. His sunglasses masked his eyes, but I knew he wasn't looking at the brochure: he hadn't turned a page for the last ten minutes.

As I brought him his clam chowder, he coughed up a "thank you" and looked at me briefly. I tried not to stare at the tiny scar across his left eyebrow.

I walked back inside with my empty tray, shaking my head. He looked familiar, but I couldn't quite place him.

Then it hit me. The car accident. The mysterious stranger who helped me out of my smashed car, just before it exploded. I rushed back to his table.

He was gone.

I moved his saucer and found his tip, along with a card:

I am deeply indebted to you. The night of your car accident, I was on my way to rob a jewelry store. Saving your life brought things back in perspective. I now live an honest life, thanks to you. God bless you! Mr. D.

I shivered. The night of my car accident, I was heading for an interview in a shady dance club. Seeing human kindness through his heroic gesture turned my life around and brought faith back into my life.

I unfolded the tip he left. Among the singles was a grand with a pen mark underlining "In God We Trust."

I said a silent prayer for him and got back to work, smiling.

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