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Which sentence does NOT have an error in grammar, usage, or mechanics?

A.
Devon wore his new gray shoes to his very first day of work.
B.
Completely exhausted from the day's activities, Madeline's shoes were thrown off as soon as she walked into the house.
C.
Duncan was nervous to ride the perilous roller-coaster eating a big lunch at the amusement park.
D.
Without the appropriate equipment, it was hard to climb the mountain.

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Answer:

D is the only one that doesn't include an error.

Step-by-step explanation:

For A:

Devon wore his new grey shoes on his first day at work.

For B:
B is using the passive voice (which is not always a bad thing), which changes the subject-verb relationship in the sentence. If you read B literally, its implication is that Madeline's shoes were completely exhausted.

"Completely exhausted from the day's activities, Madeline's shoes..."

It attaches the verb

A better sentence would be: Completely exhausted from the day's activities, Madeline threw off her shoes as soon as she walked into the house.

For C:

Duncan was nervous about riding the perilous roller-coaster after eating a big lunch at the amusement park.

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