Question

Grammar: What do you Notice?

"No, sir," said Mr. Reynolds.
Elmer pleaded. Despite his tears, the man held firm.
"I am sorry, sir. We cannot."
Elmer cried.

Answer 1

The first one needs to say, "No, sir." and the second one needs to say "I am sorry, sir but we can't."

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Answer 2

theres two commas only one