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Help me on my poems please!! Im giving 30 points!

Please be descriptive. There is another poem posted on my account. Thanks!!!​

Help me on my poems please!! Im giving 30 points! Please be descriptive. There is-example-1
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A dolphin, you make me jump with joy, pond, you keep me cool, shooting star, you’re hear one minute and gone the next, heart, the blood, you keep me alive
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