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CAN SOMEONE PLEASE REVISE THIS OR SHORTEN IT OR GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT THIS SENTENCE!!!

I have no idea if I need a ; or , or something please any English Expert willing to help!!!!

In one of the experiments conducted was the abandonment of babies; as they sat in their infant seats, their mother’s sitting by them, until ten minutes later, a signal appears, indicating their cue to leave.

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Answer: use , on the ; part

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