Question

Read the sentence below about the Chicago fire of 1871.

Schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the Chicago fire of 1871.

Which revision is the best example of adding concrete details?

Schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the Chicago fire.
Schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive Chicago fire of 1871.
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in Chicago.
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871

Answer 1

The Great Chicago Fire was a conflagration that burned from Sunday, October 8, to Tuesday, October 10, 1871. The fire killed up to 300 people, destroyed roughly 3.3 square miles of Chicago, Illinois, and left more than 100,000 residents homeless. The fire began in a neighborhood southwest of the city center.

Step-by-step explanation:

Chicago fire was on the 8th October Sunday to 10th October Tuesday.

Nearly it killed 300people. More than 10000 people became homeless.