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Write a personal narrative about a moment in your life that you find interesting. Explode the moment and show me the moment rather then just telling me. Using your vocabulary.

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I would do it but my life is boring and I think it’s i treating when you see someone else’s work

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The most interesting moment was when I was born, it is mesmerizing. Though I cannot remember most parts since it was many many years ago, but I remember seeing a light and waking up. It felt like I was in heaven. I was confused at what was happening since I was a baby. I started crying not because I was scared but because I was happy to be born and out. They held me in their arms rocking me back and forth while I was intoxicated. The woman who held me was a pretty nurse trying to stop me from crying. I didn’t understand what was going on and only understood the part that this is my new home.

I hope this is good I tried ‍♀️
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