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Is this a good conclusion sentence? In conclusion, the narrator is guilty and insane because he killed someone because of their eye.

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actually, what you should put is something more neutral. so instead of saying and insane because he killed someone because of their eye, it would be a good idea to make it more refined.

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it is important to use higher level academic sentence structure in all writing. Hope this is helpful:)

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