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User Olexii Muraviov
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I am not sure of the specific answer the question is looking for but ...

I would add the words "For example," at the beginning of the sentence that lists different jobs that people can have. It creates a smoother transition after the writer says that math plays an important part in lots of professions.

Then it would say, "For example, architects, pharmacists, and carpenters all use math every day."

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