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In "Name that Player", Do you publish the story as is? Why or why not?

User Khrysann
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Answer:

I would not publish because the story seems incomplete.

Step-by-step explanation:

When reading "Name that Player", we can see some flaws in the continuity and problems in establishing a coherent and cohesive text. This allows for a failure in the reader's understanding and a feeling that the text is incomplete and needs continuity. For this reason, I believe that the story should not be published as it is, but that it should be edited and continued, eliminating incomplete points.

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