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I need help with concrete love poem

they never knew how much
I loved him but i do
I watch him leave my life

this is what i got so far

User Josh Friedlander
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you can use the above answer
User Alexander Kosenkov
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there he was,
back again,
my memories raced,
from joy to pain.
my mind is a killer,
or is he just my cocaine?
without thought i was to fall again.
i was blinded by him,
tied together with a chain
maybe i am the one to blame?
User JeffV
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