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Edit: Kelly has written an article about how to create a podcast. Before it is published in the school newspaper, it is your job to edit Kelly’s work. Highlight or underline the errors that you find in Kelly’s article.

Edit: Kelly has written an article about how to create a podcast. Before it is published-example-1
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Answer:

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Step-by-step explanation:

Note that the errors cannot be underlined in your picture, but they are identified and listed below.

1) The article is not properly aligned. All the sentences and paragraphs are scattered all over the page.

2) In Paragraph 1, line 1-2, " What do you hope to get across to listeners". This is a question, and a question mark is required.

3) In Paragraph 2, the beginning statement is not a heading and should not be centralised. " About each" should not be at the center since it is a continuation of the previous line.

4) In paragraph 2, line 5, " The most important part of your podcast is what your interviewes have to say". The plural form of 'interviewee' is 'interviewees' and not " interviewes"

5) paragraph 4, line 4. The "um" should be quoted at the beginning and the end. Only the ending part of the quote is included.

Correction: Edit out every time someone says "um"

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