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Proofread "That's not funny", I answered, walking past him. "You shouldn't joke about that sort of thing." I frowned at him and strode up to class.
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"That's not funny", I answered, walking past him. "You shouldn't joke about that sort of thing." I frowned at him and strode up to class.

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The only thing I see wrong is that you shouldn't have a comma after "I answered". Other than that it is good!

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I honesty don't see a problem. Am I supposed to be looking for something in particular?

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