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Read the following sentence.

Leonardo's painting depicting the last supper is often considered Leonardo da Vinci's most beautiful and masterful piece of inspired creativity.

Which of the following is a more effective way to write this sentence? If it is correct, mark "correct as is."
A.
Leonardo da Vinci's The Last Supper is often considered his masterpiece.
B.
Leonardo's painting The Last Supper is often considered his most beautiful and masterful piece of inspired creativity.
C.
Leonardo's painting depicting the last supper is often considered da Vinci's most beautiful masterpiece.
D.
correct as is



Please select the best answer from the choices provided


A
B
C
D

User Tereza
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The answer is A.) Leonardo da Vinci's The Last Supper is often considered his masterpiece.

Step-by-step explanation:

User Skeeter
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Answer:

option A

Leonardo da Vinci's The Last Supper is often considered his masterpiece.

Step-by-step explanation:

The original sentence has some flaws which are :

1. The title of the painting is not written in the proper format for writing title of artistic works

2. The repetition of Leonardo da Vinci's name is not necessary as a simple pronoun could suffice

3. The word "Masterful piece" could be better replaced by "master piece".

From these, the best option that revises the sentence in the most appropriate format is option A:

Leonardo da Vinci's The Last Supper is often considered his masterpiece

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