Question

Read each sentence and determine which revision, if any, makes the sentence stronger and clearer.

I hope to tomorrow finish my science project.
The usher asked us to proceed carefully to the exit.
She encouraged the dancers to energetically, gracefully, and confidently perform the routine.

Answer 1

I hope to finish my science project tomorrow.

No revision is necessary.

She encouraged the dancers to perform the routine energetically, gracefully, and confidently.

Step-by-step explanation:

Answer 2

1ST, 3RD, 2ND

Step-by-step explanation: